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You're Gay
dannyprice

in third grade i confessed to my classmates that
 1
i didn't know who Joe Montana was
 2
because i didn't watch football
 3
 
 
the boys were quick to emasculate me
 4
and i was ready to punch their lights out for it
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but
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when Ashley MacCauliffe chimed in along with them
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it knocked the fight right outta me
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"you're gay" she said
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i wanted so desperately to tell her that i wasn't
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and in fact
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wanted her to be my girlfriend
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but
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i didn't
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instead
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i clammed up
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and thought myself as weak as they were telling me i was
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when i got home
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i ran straight to my room and cried
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after the tears stopped
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i dried my cheeks with my sleeves
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and went downstairs to ask my gramma who Joe Montana was
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10 Oct 14

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Google Ashley MacCauliffe now.
 — unknown

Be a man and listen to Bob Luman
 — unknown

Love the honesty. Very effective stanzaic breaks, especially S 6. Killer last line.
 — HisPoem

Thank you, HisPoem
 — dannyprice

Awwwww.. this is cute.
 — majan

Brilliant  looking  up your work is a  joy You are expressive  and clear
 — cassell

Thank you, Cassell.
 — dannyprice

My Grandma informed me that INDEED, I was gay and being gay meant being HAPPY, so there was certainly NOTHING wrong with being gay... and there isn't.  May she rest in peace > Love you, Gram <
 — aforbing

aforbing, thanks for reading. Grandmas are the best! And mosdef there is NOTHING wrong with being gay, and i hope you didn't get that from this piece.  Mostly wanted the piece to represent feeling out of place.
 — dannyprice

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Well done!
 — Odin

Thank you,  Odin.
 — dannyprice

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